October 24

"3. Fys. “Ta fys aym”. 00:04, 22 October 2006 (UTC)"

"3 InvisibleSun 00:36, 22 October 2006 (UTC)"

"4 InvisibleSun 19:33, 23 October 2007 (UTC) -->"

"3 Zarbon 04:02, 5 July 2008 (UTC)"

"4 Waheedone 02:46, 21 October 2008 (UTC)"

"3 for the corrected version. - InvisibleSun 21:22, 23 October 2008 (UTC) -->"

"4 Kalki 23:47, 23 October 2009 (UTC) * 3 Kalki 20:42, 16 October 2008 (UTC) but have found this to be a paraphrase, and am correcting and extending it to read:"

"2 Zarbon 22:38, 16 October 2008 (UTC)"

"3 InvisibleSun 21:22, 23 October 2008 (UTC) -->"

"3 InvisibleSun 19:33, 23 October 2007 (UTC)"

"1 Zarbon 05:34, 25 April 2008 (UTC) -->"

"2 and InvisibleSun's username is in it! This is the second quote we've come across with his username in it. The sun's invisibility is a perfect camouflage to the untrained eye, hindered by the rays of light which tear the skies asunder! Zarbon 05:34, 25 April 2008 (UTC) -->"

"3 for a poet works best under conditions of despair. Brilliant. Zarbon 05:34, 25 April 2008 (UTC)"

"4 ♞☤☮♌︎Kalki ⚚⚓︎⊙☳☶⚡ 12:35, 20 October 2013 (UTC) 1 Kalki 20:14, 23 October 2008 (UTC) 2 Kalki 20:42, 16 October 2008 (UTC) I like the phrase in context, but standing alone, apart from other portions of the poem much of the meaning and significance is lost, and Levertov seems to actually be quoting someone else, another poet or a translator in that portion of the poem. I would rank it a 3 or 4 if quoted more fully:"

"2 Kalki 20:31, 16 October 2008 (UTC)"

"2 InvisibleSun 21:22, 23 October 2008 (UTC)"

"1 Kalki 20:31, 16 October 2008 (UTC)"

"1 InvisibleSun 21:22, 23 October 2008 (UTC)"

"3 Kalki 06:04, 18 October 2009 (UTC) with a lean toward 4."

"3 Kalki 06:04, 18 October 2009 (UTC) with a strong lean toward 4."

"3 ♞☤☮♌︎Kalki ⚚⚓︎⊙☳☶⚡ 21:22, 22 October 2014 (UTC)"

"3 ♞☤☮♌︎Kalki ⚚⚓︎⊙☳☶⚡ 05:20, 24 October 2014 (UTC)"